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December 12, 2015

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Leon at LEON DAVIS - 3 days ago
HOW TO Write Books http:/JAMES PATTERSON BOOKS IF YOU ARE A WRITER it will pay off in spades if you follow James Paterson. Study him, read his books, learn from his mistakes or try to improve on the ideas there. Not lifting content put principles. The lesson maybe in plain sight. Soon. People are changed by things or people change things as Leonardo Da Vinci taught us way back in the ... Italian Renaissance FictionWorkout.com I can Fix Your Slice By Email no Charge

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Leon at LEON DAVIS - 3 days ago
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Leon at LEON DAVIS - 4 weeks ago
............Comments or opinions may or may not be true or accurate. Just like anything you read see or hear. But if you engage your frontal lobs you may get what you look for, if you look with all your heart ............. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WdaW2A5yrd0Click to hear the future,,, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WdaW2A5yrd0 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WdaW2A5yrd0 I can Fix Your Slice By Email no Charge

MOSES WROTE

Leon at LEON DAVIS - 5 weeks ago
In the beginning....God Created..... Man has used this prompt and will forever. It's in The book of Genesis we find man has a brain he has rebellion in his blood and he has a weakness. WOMAN. The Bible tells us God is a SPIRIT... a spirit is a force, the GREAT SPIRIT and all powerful we were told. No one agrees with me 100% or with each other for that matter. And when they do they are lying or in a cult. Some people believe man imagined God. And it's all a figment of Moses' imagination. If God is a figment of man's imagination its because God first imagined us. But GOD is not a ... more »

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Leon at LEON DAVIS - 5 weeks ago
............Comments or opinions may or may not be true or accurate. Just like anything you read see or hear. But if you engage your frontal lobs you may get what you look for, if you look with all your heart .............Now everyone knows... public officials are bought and paid for...It should be obvious why the America Dream is smelling like the dung house. But there are still the kool aid drinkers who think they can fix it if they could just put the right guy in the white house I can Fix Your Slice By Email no Charge

Who is Bribing Public Officials, now that Trump confessed his sins.

Leon at LEON DAVIS - 1 month ago
........... I look at things others turn away from. My current link is the Koch Brother's. They are influencing American politics and every area of American Life...... so what have they done and what are they tiring to do. They are accused of bulling farmers to control markets. And it has been said to have been done in a most abusive UN-American way. This article below sa... more »

LEON SAID....

Leon at LEON DAVIS - 1 month ago
....America's Moral compass has been replaced with a speedometer. I can Fix Your Slice By Email no Charge

Writer? First write a HOOK

Leon Franklin Davis at LEON DAVIS - 2 months ago
Begin by watching the first 25% of a movie. Then by sketching, in your imagination, entertain your fresh thoughts and ideas. The first 50 pages of a book is the HOOK. But the first few minutes of a movie sometimes is like the too. I call it the opening hook. It is the beginning of the HOOK. The movie maker's first attempt to entice the viewer. Check it out. The HOOK should include the Protagonist because that is what readers want. So the beginning without her, needs be short. Keep it short and detached enough to signal the reader clearly who the Protagonist really is. Movies like the ... more »

Fiction work out

Leon at LEON DAVIS - 2 months ago
www.fictionworkout.com There is a new emphasis on writing faster, smarter...........and learning to do it in a direct motion. Saving time and money. You still turn your imagination loose ... call up the muse. This new language will help. People have said there is nothing new under the sun, but language is constantly changing. So lets break it down, make it our own and write better stories. That's what I've been doing for six years. People don't have the time to do what I did. I Studied creative writing night and day. Mostly I help people who are better writer's than me. Not that ... more »

Writing tips.

Leon at LEON DAVIS - 2 months ago
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Leon at LEON DAVIS - 6 months ago
Write Fiction: Document Your Novel When a famous writer speaks, newer writers listen. The problem is interpreting, assimilating, and mastering a new craft takes work: Effort applied over time. The get high and achieve mentality, is over rated. The downside is loss of efficiency. I could philosophize. I could tell you stories. I could quote Confucius. I could quote famous scientist. The fact is the answers are available to anyone who will work at it. Follow what you believe is right and observe yourself learning to write fiction. People nee... more »

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Leon at LEON DAVIS - 6 months ago
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Orphan Girl - Gillian Welch

Leon at LEON DAVIS - 8 months ago
Orphan Girl - Gillian Welch ............Comments or opinions may or may not be true or accurate. Just like anything you read see or hear. But if you engage your frontal lobs you may get what you look for, if you look with all your heart ............. I can Fix Your Slice By Email no Charge

Chicago Novevist spots you

Leon at LEON DAVIS - 8 months ago
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Leon at LEON DAVIS - 8 months ago
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Leon at LEON DAVIS - 9 months ago
............Comments or opinions may or may not be true or accurate. Just like anything you read see or hear. But if you engage your frontal lobs you may get what you look for, if you look with all your heart ............. I can Fix Your Slice By Email no Charge

How to Stop Pimping and Write a Bestseller.

Leon at LEON DAVIS - 9 months ago
............Comments or opinions may or may not be true or accurate. Just like anything you read see or hear. But if you engage your frontal lobs you may get what you look for, if you look with all your heart ............. Roselle man accused of pimping while out on bail in sex abuse case - 1 - [image: Allen C. Iroegbulem] Allen C. Iroegbulem Jake Griffin [image: Jake Griffin] A 24-year-old Roselle man is accused of pimping teenage girls throughout the suburbs while free on bail as he awaited trial for sexually abusing a different teenage girl in McHen... more »

Chicago Novelist: MINE IS A LIFE-FIELD

Leon at LEON DAVIS - 11 months ago
Mine is a Life-field / LAST YEAR SUCKED AND NEXT YEAR WILL BE WORSE....but it will be the best in some ways... for some people. Maybe it's a zero sum game....until the poor inherit the earth. The poor will inherit the earth... I believe a wise man said these words... His sayings were hard and some of them have taken me 70 years to figure out... Others I'm still not sure... but I believe because I choose to believe and even that was a gift... maybe because I'm poor. I didn't take the vow of poverty, it took me. (c) 2014 Leon Davis. I can Fix Your Slice By Email no Charge

When I look at what I wrote...?

Leon at LEON DAVIS - 11 months ago
"Sammy do you have a flashlight?” Crying Wolf asked “Yes sir,” said Sammy. “Shine it on your face." Sammy complied and all eyes locked on him, his face pale and he appeared wrinkled and tired. The campers sat, not talking, listening as the wind wisped again then died. Two-hundred feet away a Lumbee Indian called River Lilly, sat hidden, breathing rhythmically, preparing to beat an Indian Drum and let out a war cry. Her companion prepared to shoot a flaming arrow into the fire circle. “It is important for everyone to close your eyes and remain seated,” said Crying Wolf. ... more »

A Topic sentance in a paragraph, the main idea in a scene

Leon Franklin Davis at LEON DAVIS - 11 months ago
 ............. I'M JUST trying to think of a way to say it to myself... that will help me remember...THE TOPIC SENTENCE, and/or the FOCAL CHARACTER provide many good benefits to the FICTION writer but most writers I meet resists fundamental rules. Well we can call them suggestions or exercises. If seems to me it is like preparing the wood before you paint. Or pre-heating the oven... more »

What Should We Write About

..........When I started writing fiction in 2009

 
      I had an idea pop in my head that DNA testing could be abused. Why? Because living in Chicago has taught me anything can be bought and sold. I came across a man who said he was in the DNA testing supply business. I asked him what he thought about the potential of abusing records or reports.

He said , no way. I mentioned it to other people , they said no way.

I goggled, falsified DNA and found a New York Times Article that told me I was intuitive.

FALSIFIED DNA is a reality. I'll  WRITE IT IN MY NOVEL .

NextOur perhaps fictionalize the topic.
 



November 01, 2015

MOSES WROTE

In the beginning....God Created.....

Man has used this prompt and will forever. It's in The book of Genesis we find man has a brain, he has rebellion in his blood and he has a weakness. WOMAN.  The Bible tells us God is a SPIRIT...  a spirit is a force, the GREAT SPIRIT and all powerful we were told.

No one agrees with me 100% or with each other for that matter. And when they do they are lying or in a cult.

Some people believe man imagined God. And it's all a figment of Moses' imagination. If God is a figment of man's imagination its because God first imagined us. But  GOD is not a figment, but much more. God is a word we use to help us imagine.  So the Question is not, "Is there one God", but what is our role in all of this and "What is imagination." Is there good and evil?

There are two kinds. Great and small, true and false, vain and Holy. Sick and healthy, abundant and famine.

These are some of the ideas that can help us think about it. It all starts in the imagination. The imagination is sacred. But we are in an unhealthy world. We must conclude there are no perfect and holy people.

Some things are good enough... and that's good enough for me. But pretending anyone is perfect is not perfect. Pretending we are perfect, is self-defeating. Pretending we don't need  each other is just wrong.


............Comments or opinions may or may not be true or accurate. Just like anything you read see or hear. But if you engage your frontal lobs you may get what you look for, if you look with all your heart .............Now everyone 

knows... public officials are bought and paid for...It should be obvious why the America 
Dream is smelling like the dung house.


But there are still the kool aid drinkers who think they can fix it if they could just put the right guy in the white house

October 14, 2015

Who is Bribing Public Officials, now that Trump confessed his sins.

............Comments or opinions may or may not be true or accurate. Just like anything you read see or hear. But if you engage your frontal lobs you may get what you look for, if you look with all your heart .............




I look at things others turn away from. My current link is the Koch Brother's. They are influencing American politics and every area of American Life...... so what have they done and what are they tiring to do.

They are accused of bulling farmers to control markets. And it has been said to have been done in a most abusive UN-American way.


This article below says they want a move toward Libertarian-ism.  I saw a documentary. I have a Christian World View... they seem to be unmerciful against the poor  but I am not interested in easy answers. Easy answers are useful to identify areas that of propaganda or misunderstanding and point to the areas that need work and research....

Q. Is welfarefare full of coruption? Of course. But very little is done to clamp down on excess in the program administration . I AGREE WITH TRUMP... the government has failed...it is not working.

Government Programs almost always grow until they are out of hand. Ripen until they rot, full of thieves and deal makers at the top.

I worked in the defense industry in the late 60's. In the seventies Huge Defense Companies were indited for corruption in gaining kickback deals from suppliers.

In Illinois I observed the corruption in Government programs. THERE WAS A COMMUNITY HEATH CENTER THAT HAD LOST 8 MILLION DOLLARS.... the story read , no one knows where the money went. Except for the purchase of a fence, there were no receipts.

This is just the tip of an ice burg that will sink the ship of state.

I does not take a detective to see there is evidence of mass corruption. The Koch Brothers are business men... they love making money... if they want a move toward Dr. RON PAULS  points of view , why do they back only certain candidates.

I say Trump has poured it out.... he admits to bribing public officials... and says it it wrong and it can't go on. How to fix it? Tax donations to all political campaigns and fix America. Punish tax cheat in and out of public office.

Learn about the Koches

October 09, 2015

LEON SAID....

....America's Moral compass has been replaced with a speedometer. 

October 07, 2015

Fiction work out

www.fictionworkout.com There is a new emphasis on writing faster, smarter...........and learning to do it in a direct motion. Saving time and money. You still turn your imagination loose ... call up the muse.

This new language will help.

People have said there is nothing new under the sun, but language is constantly changing. So lets break it down, make it our own and write better stories.

That's what I've been doing for six years.

People don't have the time to do what I did.  I Studied creative writing night and day. Mostly I help people who are better writer's than me. Not that I'm so smart and brilliant like they tell me but I put in the time and read and try to learn from the best. What a great day for information. But not every great writer is a great teacher.

I took a James Patterson course. It was inspiring and an honor but he could not teach every point of great writing and he could not meet with every student.

The writer needs to learn, study and never stop. Geography is a word I learned to spell by learning a rhyme. That was a long time ago. But I still remember.

Structure your novel
Beginning Middle  End

How?

Structure sixty or seventy scenes
Beginning middle End

How?

Georges Cousin Dances Every Trendy Dance Artfully

Join the party?  This technique is not always taught so straight forward. But that's all changing.

There are no rules to writing in a stream of consciousnesses. But every discipline has rules. You can bend them and break them but never completely forsake them.

Rule number one. Get to know your protagonist. And give her a GOAL.

Here is where planning can produce a better story. There is an
uncountable number of goals. Remember George's Cousin? " C " is for Conflict, guess what George's stands for...




May 29, 2015

The Next Step in Evolution http://thecomosbewithyou.blogspot.com/



              Write Fiction: Document Your Novel
              When a famous writer speaks, newer writers listen. The problem is
interpreting, assimilating, and mastering a new craft takes work: Effort
applied over time. The get high and achieve mentality, is over rated. The
downside is loss of efficiency. I could philosophize. I could tell you stories.
I could quote Confucius. I could quote famous scientist. The fact is the
answers are available to anyone who will  work at it. Follow what you
believe is right and observe yourself learning to write fiction.
              People need people. This is the theme of a great
Barbara Streisand song.
              Need and want are not the same. Occasion, they are not
fully understood. An un-born child needs a mother to be born, last time I
inquired. In needs and learns to express want for food. I do completely
expect the progressive force of modern wisdom to enable men to give
birth to babies and a new category of humans will be created: The Assholean.  
              Without further ado do...
              Any day things could change. Man seems to have been given the keys
to the asylum.
              This is a work of non-fiction based on my journey as a writer and a
Technical Engineer, I must remind myself, But that’s another story.

 First thing a new writer should do is realize, you are not the first one to
want to communicate a story. Yes, I said, Communicate. You need people,
and you may not think about it. Growing from that need, you think you
should write. I want to save time. To save time you need... think. Do not stop.
Do not allow your mind to wonder.
              Don’t agree?  Not necessary, impossible? What do you think?  
http://thecomosbewithyou.blogspot.com/Don't Send Soldiers Send Psycho Seeds. An American Chemical Company Will bring Peace...but not the peace some prayed so long for.

It's an idea for a book you could be writing.  http://thecomosbewithyou.blogspot.com/http://thecomosbewithyou.blogspot.com/